tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7291462430609922363.post8376409359751126339..comments2023-05-09T03:17:00.347-07:00Comments on Ripples in a small pond: Another light-hearted poem, this time about bank robberyPinkerbellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08284177422261688401noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7291462430609922363.post-73930343669158711802009-04-19T15:43:00.000-07:002009-04-19T15:43:00.000-07:00Yes our God of Another World is very inventive... ...Yes our God of Another World is very inventive... it's like hide & seek - it's very amusing!Pinkerbellnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7291462430609922363.post-77311208037268750752009-04-19T13:03:00.000-07:002009-04-19T13:03:00.000-07:00Very clever and highly entertaining poem and good ...Very clever and highly entertaining poem and good story to boot. Enjoyed it very much. Came over from God of another World as his recommendation. I will be back. EddieEddie Bluelightshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18069024660422117718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7291462430609922363.post-91808872824977048402009-04-19T11:19:00.000-07:002009-04-19T11:19:00.000-07:00Ah thanks very much, it just started as a play on ...Ah thanks very much, it just started as a play on the lad's name and kind of turned into a little tale of its own. I'll come over to visit you soon...Pinkerbellnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7291462430609922363.post-42658465291681376942009-04-19T08:18:00.000-07:002009-04-19T08:18:00.000-07:00That was fun! I love the rhyme...great story!
Br...That was fun! I love the rhyme...great story!<br /><br />BreezeCarolyn R. Parsonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14529999558075983828noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7291462430609922363.post-52891377611754701172009-04-16T15:48:00.000-07:002009-04-16T15:48:00.000-07:00Ha ha. I feel that I took some valuable time out o...Ha ha. I feel that I took some valuable time out of my blogging to provide you with such a fine (??) poem and so I feel it my right to post it here too... what the hell else am I going to fill the space with? Except bad haikus and some drunken drivel...Pinkerbellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08284177422261688401noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7291462430609922363.post-16630229928667544442009-04-16T13:21:00.000-07:002009-04-16T13:21:00.000-07:00As this poem appeared on my blog, I believe I own ...As this poem appeared on my blog, I believe I own the copyright. Now, I don't object to your re-printing it here, but I can hardly be expected to let quality work go for a pittance.<br /><br />I will be on the look-out for a squillion, jillion, gazillion $ in small, unmarked bills. Leave them in a plain brown envelope behind the picture of Vanilla Ice on my blog. Don't make me send the heavy mob around.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7291462430609922363.post-9344629748329211762009-04-15T23:38:00.000-07:002009-04-15T23:38:00.000-07:00I did think about it a lot, so that's good to hear...I did think about it a lot, so that's good to hear.Pinkerbellnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7291462430609922363.post-21999872395024306142009-04-15T22:15:00.000-07:002009-04-15T22:15:00.000-07:00Pinkerbell - This was a lot of fun to read. I lik...Pinkerbell - This was a lot of fun to read. I like the playful language, and I can tell you put a lot of effort into forming this poems - some great words, here. I agree with Janine in that the narrative is very good. It is reassuring to the reader and confident in tone.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7291462430609922363.post-20490071669868649582009-04-15T18:34:00.000-07:002009-04-15T18:34:00.000-07:00Ah thanks Janine. I've just started writing this s...Ah thanks Janine. I've just started writing this sort of poetry and your encouragement is greatly appreciated. <br /><br />Yes my Grandmother was the most beautiful person I will ever know - I can be sure when I say that. It's going to be tough, but each one gets easier right? :-)Pinkerbellnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7291462430609922363.post-40619911319129642172009-04-15T18:19:00.000-07:002009-04-15T18:19:00.000-07:00What a fabulous tale! I am reminded of Daniel Defo...What a fabulous tale! I am reminded of Daniel Defoe's Moll Flanders, as well as Alfred Noyes' poem, "The Highwayman." This elicits my sympathies in much the same way, and I find myself cheering Rob's success...and your distinctive narrator voice and the lighthearted tone capture my imagination, especially with phrases such as "When Robin Bank were nought..." That first line transported me to another time and place...Your word choices are brilliant. I found myself lost to my world within the first few words...and I was enveloped by your world. Absolutely delightful! Your poetry truly concisely captures a whole world. Thank you too for your very kind words on my recent post. I am so sorry about your grandmother...she sounds like a very wonderful lady...the first anniversaries are so very, very hard, aren't they? I think my mom's Birthday was one of the hardest of all...you will be in my thoughts all next week. Thank you so much for your friendship! I truly treasure it! With love, Janine XOSniffles and Smileshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10073156486641622612noreply@blogger.com